Struggling a little
It's quite apparent you're against the raping of our natural rescources, the horrors of war, and starvation in indigence-ridden countries... but why is the man going down the elevator responsible for these calamities?
Is he supposed to be a certain world leader, or what? But nice flash. Great sensual details; deserves a higher score. I'm just unable to see who the faceless man was (the one that was shot), and how that scene was connected to the elevator man, and why the elevator man was responsable for the horrors of the world.
Don't suppose you could drop a hint, huh?