Just like the first one.....
This is probably a bit better than your first submission but I fear that it's not enough to stay on the portal.... I think you should look at some tuts on flashkit. Just go to goole and type in flashkit... there are enough tuts on how to do good flash :D
Right... and yeah... donate money to the people in trouble because of the Katrina Storm.... I already donated money with my family. Exactly 150 US dollar, so help them too... be the light in the darkness