good work!
youve done a pretty good job so far. looks good. Only thing i can say is to fine tune your drawing, but other than that, you do well. Keep it up.
Reviews for "Forsaken"
good shit man!
nice
LOL! Potential though!
That guys got some TWEEKED out muscle definition...
I think all in all you did a decent job. But some things looked like you didn't put enough effort into it.
I think you could be one of the better artists on NG...DONT GIVE UP!!!
-SJM
Improve music quality too...i didn't really like the song, but, that's just personal preference...make it whatever song...but make it sound clearer...
This coulda been alot better.....
Another dragon ball z initation. The story was alright, but you should have started it off with the guy in high school and then the bad guy breaks in threw a window and they start fighting in the class room, and the teaacher gets punched out. Then you could have had them break threw walls and cause massive chaos in the school. But at least you should have stated where they were fighting because it was just the same picture being rotated. =( Further more you didnt state what kind of "abilities" he had. It was just another dbz show to me. and next time work on your animation becuase at times it was too slow, and very choppy. nice try for a second flash though
Surprising...
Though your character proportions and body interactivity need improvement, I was very surprised at the actually GOOD special effects that you had in the movie. Your usage of gradients in the glowing eyes and the fire were pretty good. Plus, the background, the borders and the overall coloring shows that you have massive potential.
Try to improve on the body proportions. Also, scenes like the hands accepting the sword need to have the thumb and the fingers on seperate layers. The overall movie was pretty impressive, you just need to work out on the details.
Good luck on your next flash~