way too long
The biggest problem with this was the pacing. It just went on and on after the joke had pretty much played out.
Edit it down to about half, and maybe the joke won't be stale by the time the piece ends.
way too long
The biggest problem with this was the pacing. It just went on and on after the joke had pretty much played out.
Edit it down to about half, and maybe the joke won't be stale by the time the piece ends.
((( CUTE )))
The Red ball was funny, but you should have made it with much more activity, like maybe when you click on it it would boince or something, also adding some backrounds would have been nice aswell...
~X~
Absolutely boring
Wow, an animation rubbing one out to the Transformers. I got bored after a few minutes of 'ugh ugh' and the smacking sound.
yea so did I, I guess its a lot funnier as an inside joke.
Not.......to my taste
Why make such a hideous thing?!!? The graphics were real good and the pornographic drawings of robots I must day were very artistic, but I thought there might be some kind of twist at the end. To my horror, I discovered I had watched a guy jack off for 5 minutes, only to see him cum. Sorry, not too happy bout that.
Nope. :/
This is kind of retarded hun. If your going to bash someone on the internet, just don't do it. its stupid.