Poor Guy Gets a Slagging
God that guy must have given you some damn bad reviews, but at least you animated your main character well.
Reviews for "The Sinister Truth"
Nice!
this was funny, I liked it.
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Well, let me be frank about this. What exactly did you use to make the fapping sound? It sounded pretty realistic to me, and don't give me that crap about how you used a cod, like you told 'Mentor you did. Guess who the ones who REALLY wanked off the movie are ;)
Zombie-Pimp responds:
are you SM's boyfriend or something?
I'll have you know that this is an inside joke between friends, so stop sucking SM's dick and mind your own business instead of trying to stick up for a guy when you don't even know what's actually going on.
((( CUTE )))
The Red ball was funny, but you should have made it with much more activity, like maybe when you click on it it would boince or something, also adding some backrounds would have been nice aswell...
~X~
way too long
The biggest problem with this was the pacing. It just went on and on after the joke had pretty much played out.
Edit it down to about half, and maybe the joke won't be stale by the time the piece ends.