its...ok..
I thaught you did a decent job on this but it was kind of slow paced and there was no excitement in the voices so the little things brung you down but otherwise you did good just keep up the work
its...ok..
I thaught you did a decent job on this but it was kind of slow paced and there was no excitement in the voices so the little things brung you down but otherwise you did good just keep up the work
Not bad, Not bad
The animation is ehhhh... but I dont need to say it enough times, cause I know you'll hear it more than once, and the fact this is your first flash, so I won't go into details of it. But the voice work DEFINATELY needs more of an improvement. I kinda found it cute to match up the voicework with the attitudes each character has, and it fits, but they're too flat (like, read this, read that, blah blah, cut, print, release). Gotta get more "animated" with the voice work. But I found it cute overall, and I love original artwork flashes. So Keep up the good work.
Erm this isnt my first flash but ok. :P
Thanks for the tips.
Solid work
This is not very good animation in all honesty, but it doesn't really hurt it much. You presented it very well and did a very good job on the voice acting.
Can't wait to see your next episode.
NOTE - The music at the end is a very broken loop. Hopefully you'll fix that next time around.
I know, Im still working on my animation skills. And Um I'll check out the music but it sounded fine when I exported :P
Good
Nothing to add.
its good
it was good, nice choice in music, the graphics got better later in the movie, keep improving, cause this one was good, the next one i hope to be even better