Wow, what a stereotypical flash.
Are you some dressed-in-black pathetic goth kid? Beaten by your parents and shunned as a child? Suffer from severe emotional trauma? You'd think so with this lame-ass flash you just crapped up. No symbolism, just pathetic, random bullshit. Damn goths. Make a real flash.
Hmm I did make a real flash. You just watched it and reviewed it. Dont mean to toot my own horn but somehow it got on the front page. Damn goths, right?
I'm sure you know this...
But the one thing this lacks is plot.
Your animation is great, your style is truely unique, the sound is pretty good as well. You definately show a lot of promise as a flash artist.
I'm not sure if you did this flash just as experimentation or what, but the main issue is that there's no plot. I usually put more weight on this, but I'm going to give you a 7 and hopefully encourage you to do more work, and try to come up with a story to tell.
I really enjoyed your work. Now put it to good use. ; )
Like ya style
I really like ya style man keep it up! I like it already but maybe if you add a story or some game elements or whatever your work could become really popular
not bad fore a second flash
i realy like'd the style keep it up
nice
That was really cool keep em comming