Good idea, but needs some help
The main issue I had with this flash was timing. So many parts of this took up time that wasn't beneficial to the plot. Do we really need to see Samus ride the elevator for 25 seconds? We get the idea that it takes awhile; merely stating the "20 minutes later" message would have sufficed one time, without the extras. Again with the grapple hook if you pressed the yellow button- do we really need to see Samus extend the grapple hook and retract for that long? It seemed to take away from the movie, and was in all accounts very boring to watch.
Also- you need to have someone help you with your grammar and spelling.
Remember that a joke is only funny the first 3 times or so. Mentioning Luigi and the whip so many times was redundant.
Overall, it was a nice idea. Try and expand more on the plot next time.