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yo boy , very good
Reviews for "Big Red - Mr Jones"
BigRed responds:
Sanka yoo!
well...
Nice work..
but try to fix the volumes, the vocals are definetly too loud.
BigRed responds:
I can't change anything right now as I've lost the original recordings and can't be bothered to re-record it. In the future things will be mixed better, I'm working on it!
this is good
There's not a whole lot of decent amateur rap out there that doesn't sound really corny and just not clever or timed well.
This is HUGE HUGE exception to that. This is an excellent (if short) and incredibly well written and poignant example of well-thought out and aptly engineered rhyme paired with a catchy beat and instrumental...
Listening to it again, I am stuck how on occasion these gems do actually show in their proper spot on newgrounds instead of the normal multi-tracked drivel that graces the front page of the audio portal normally.
The only thing I think is funny is you used the word "refute" in reference to what the character could do in the case of his own "sh*t talking". It doesn't exactly make sense in this context as the word refute means to figuratively dismantle (as in to refute someone else's statement), and why would the character want to sabotage his own argument? Anyway - there's a more appropriate word choice there that I can't suggest at right now.
BigRed responds:
Well written review, thanks for taking the time!
Think about the similar phrase "He wouldn't fight because he couldn't fight back." The downfall of my sentence is the pronoun "it", as what "it" refers to is ambiguous. It's tricky writing with rhyme and rythm without losing clarity, and I did lose a bit there. I'm working on it though, expect better next time! :D Thanks again!
sounds like a remix of...
a cid cudi song, forget which one but the beat is more or less the same, how ever not saying its bad in fact it's fairly good
BigRed responds:
Possibly the samples were the same. Thanks!
good shit
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p.s. all beat's are free
BigRed responds:
I'll check out yo' stuff. I'm surprised you're putting your phone number on the intrawebz though man, you might get a lot of strange calls if you keep doing that. Thanks for 'el review!