OK....
Sprites get gay after awhile. Next time just do stick figures if you have to. And avoid using giant robots and weird things for a ww2 flash.
Reviews for "WWII Part 1- The Landing"
SbenixNG responds:
This wasint ment to be exactly like WWII.
Bad
That's pretty much insulting WWII.
SbenixNG responds:
Your pretty much insulting me for saying that to something ive worked so hard on. You dont even have a single movie.
Alright...
Here's some constructive stuff it may help it may not I'm not sure.
First: It was good, in a way that you slowly got better and better.
Second: Make sure that you don't get slowly better and better throughout your next submission, seeing how this passed it was almost unlikely do to the poor beggining.
Third: I commend you for making this go on for more than 5 minutes, with Flash I absolutely know the hardships of making this stuff so great job at that and for keeping up the sound the whole time.
Fourth: Next time put in some script and give it a planning sheet before you put it all down, and if you find something better in that area do it!
Last: This really isn't something I thought would make it, yet I did save it, so great job and keep it up Part II should be about 100x better if it hits.
-Reign
SbenixNG responds:
Thanks alot. I would defietly say this is the most proper review I have reiceved for this submission. Ill definetly follow your advice on my next movie.
like the metal slug thing but it was a little bori
basicly for i dont know five minutes you whatch metal slug people fight a little boring
SbenixNG responds:
Thanks, and yeah I think it does get boring.
good lord.
nothing like WWII at all.....dont even bother watching this...so unrealistic... same guys being killed the SAME way over and OVER..and the tanks...and the stupid little machine gun..oh and on Omaha..try making more U.S. Soldiers...there were more than that..overall very bad. =)
SbenixNG responds:
This isint ment to be exactly realistic. This is my first time using sprites but ill make a better version sometime.