Great
The action is awesome, the only thing you need to work on is the voices they to low.
Reviews for "Black Knights Episode 1"
Veeeery nice!
You're a talented animator. I like watching your work, especially the battle scenes! Still could talk a bit louder ;) I knew he would catch the arrow, lol :D
WTF!
the end credits had the dynasty warriors theme lol, good job though could use some work but over all i think it was ok
could have been better
i like the concept alot. however, voice acting suffered along with some animation as well the ability... or lack there of, to actually Hear what the characters are saying.
I suggest
- Throw on fake accents the best you can for other characters
- Try to generate your own SFX, rather than ripping overused ones
- Add a bass drummed ambience to give the feel of a time of knights and battle
- Take your time when animating, try to have movement when they speak or take any majior action. Like in the begining, when the main character is riding a horse and his hair bounces up and down, try to add another frame of animation in. Many flash artists have their own specific art style. But the originals that the submit lack in subtle to obvious ways in the art and voice acting. If you took time, did not rush once, and NEVER set a date when you say "im going to finish it by...." yada yada yada.
- I feel that this could in fact have a good NG rep if you work on it
- Use... "Pretend" Languages or in fact real ones such as Russian, Dutch, Romainian, German, Swedish.... the works.
- Use your story, its pretty good!
Well...
The animation was great. A true work of art. The idea, creative, and the concept, acted out well! The only reason it didn't get a nine or ten was because the voices were so damn quiet! You should speak louder and more clearly, or just turn up the volume on your mic.