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Reviews for "Vamp ep. 5"

So F@#$in awsome!!

I *HICKUP* loved it!! Continue the good *HICKUP* work. Don't worry about the spelling, I'm not good at thet steff anyway. Well, you get a *HICKUP* 10. Back to the bar! Oh waitor!

Michelangelo responds:

lol, let me guess...you "drink too much"

Wow, this was amazing

Why didn't i see this earlier? This is an amazing flash. Its at 3.9, hope it gets a 4+, it deserves it! The story line is great, even not watching the other 4 episodes, it makes me want to. Great original drawing that take time and make it alot better. The voices are great, but i dont know what people are saing about the stuff. It mixed well with the background music. I hope there is an episode 6, i dont know, it kind of leaves you hanging. Love your inspiration, and the only thing that bugs me is obvious, easy typos and it said where, "where on the same side." It should be we're. Thanks

Michelangelo responds:

oh god no...not another typo, i get so caught up in the animation i dont pay attention to the smaller details D:

wow this was pretty good.

i like the style of the animaion but i dont like the scribbles if you clean it up some itd be waaay better, and on a side note chains voice acting was shit, terrible, but other wise, very good flash.

Michelangelo responds:

i pretty much get a consensus about that. i intend to lower the detial for smoother animation. basic colors, shapes, and outlines really.
thanks for the review :)

A good flash work to view, but needs a litttl work

To begin I would like to list the things I liked about this short:
1. the Mood- it was dark
2. the Voices- especially the "hired gun"
3. the subtitles- colors for each character

but the things that needed a bit of work were:
1. animation- could've been smoother, more movement in the characters.
2. graphics- the art was a tad sloppy, probably due to mouse only drawing and no tablet - I understand. it's pretty difficult to do an entire animation with just a mouse to draw.

All in all, it was a good short and thank you for taking your time to make an entertaining piece. Remember: You can't please everybody so do what you think is your best.

Michelangelo responds:

i intend to lower the detial for smoother animation. basic colors, shapes, and outlines really.

thanks :)

hmmm

This flash movie is great over all but some of the fbf wasn't good. You have gotten better over a period of time and the sound/music was good.
but the small details you lefted out made it look sloppy. Either way keep up the good work.

Michelangelo responds:

i wonder what small detials you mean by. it would be nice if you give specific ones, but thanks regardlessly.