Reviews for My first metal song

[Rickbass21]

Sounds good!

Hey speed! That sounds awsome for your first metal song. Keep it up.

speedmetalmessiah responds:

Yeah too bad it has no structure haha. Thanks for the reviews.

[kensmalts]

a good intro

this would bee good for an intro... then go into somehting faster add that double picking solo you have... change it up a bit for a few bars and then go to that thing you have for an outro and find a cool way to end it all and you have a song... just add water... and drums and vocals. but with a cool ass song like that the words will write themselves. I just want to hear a full song from you... you have so many cool parts. You have way more ability for soloing that I have. gave it a 5. SLAYER!

speedmetalmessiah responds:

Thanks a lot for the compliments.This was the first thing I ever tried writing on a guitar and I'm still pretty new to song writing so when I get better you can bet your ass there will be a remake of this.

Oh and when the time comes I might call on you for some vocals my mic really blows.That is if you don't mind.

[Slayer-of-trolls]

This is a great tune.

Sorry I've never gotten around to reviewing it before this. You should re-record this with some heavy drums. I think this has pontential to be a great song. it's got some killer riffs. The solo seems a bit out of place, at least to me but man, those riffs kick ass.

speedmetalmessiah responds:

No problem man.I would like to record this again and arrange it as a full tune I just need to remember how to play all the riffs hahahaha.The solo did suck but hey I'll change it at some point.Thanks for the review.

[I-Will-Defy]

jeah!

Oh shit I can't vote on your stuff! maybe it's because I'm still on AOL...

This is cool stuff I really like it.

speedmetalmessiah responds:

Thanks man.Sorry I'm kinda tired right now I've been up for over 24 hours so I can't really think of much to say.

[DarkHomonculus]

Good

It was good for your "first" Still awesome though

speedmetalmessiah responds:

Thanks man.I might remake this one and make it really bad ass.You should check out Grind it's my best song.Thanks for the review.