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Reviews for "innerlight: the storm"

Great

I guess next time Dr. Macky will have to build his robot with an electrical shock barrier AND falling debris protection. Great animation man, keep it up :)

It was good...

...but the reason why I gave you a 6 rather then a 9 was bc the villain succumbed so easily. There was a nice introduction, a cool acceleration into the actual battle, but there was barely any battle. In the future, make the fights longer.

-WLM

Meh.

You desperatly need to work on your dialouge, it was very, very, very dull, not stuff that people would say when they fell 100ft to the ground, they wouldn't just say "Oops, didn't do good this time, maybe next time I'll get him" villians would fight untill that bitch is dead.
Add more gore to it.

KiWi

Could use some work

I agree with the previous review about making it stylish without voices. So you get a 10 for style. Keep working and you may have something. The plot was so-so and if you arent going to use voices run a spell checker on the text, lots of errors. It held my interest, and could have held it longer given a longer story line. Keep making them though and I think you could come out with a great one.

Mediocre, but well animated.

The story isn't very interesting, but I like the giant robot in the city business and the music is cool. The animation is done well, but the graphics themselves aren't that great.

Also some decent voice acting instead of subtitles would add a lot to this.