I can't stand this
This series make me want to run to the nearest thing and kill it. After i pluck out the characters eyeballs.
Reviews for "Malltime Musings 5"
Pretty good
Quite funny, but thr foul mouthed floating fish needs his own cartoon, that bit was hilarious.
This was a preaty funny flash.
Holand boy SHUT THE FRICK UP!!!!$@#$%#
Anyway, back to the subject at hand, dude that was a preatty damn good flash. I thought it was better if you watched it with friends (which I did). Also this flash was a whole lot funnier then it was orignally, becuse this type of thing happened a couple days ago.
Graphics are good, but the story isn't.
I'm usually writing revieuws for the movie's i like most. But because i can see that you have so much potential i would like to give you some advice. Make better scripts. If you are giving it al you've got than it's a nice try and a lot of people like it but, if you let someone else (or really make something funny yourself) write a script.
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You are a great animator, no doubt about it, but animation isn't everything. I know a lot of people think i'm a bastard for giving all of your hard effort a bloody 6, but let me try to explain:
1. I found it all to "played". I know the whole conversation was set-up, but if you really want it to sound/look like it is a normal conversation, you shouldn't let them talk seperatly (hope i spelled that right). When they talk threw eachother it sounds far more real (it's just a tip, if you hate me by now you shouldn't read further).
2. Because the animation is far above average animators, you got the 6. I can see that the style is perfect and the voice synchronicing (hope i spelled that one right to) is flawles.
3. Because the animation wasn't really a animation (they just sat there) i gave the style a low 4 (who do i have the feeling some people want to slap me right now?). The graphics deserve a "thumbs up" 8 because it really looks good.
4. The actual sound was good, but not good enough for a 7 or higher. The voice-acting from the left dude (mozus or something?) was really good. The middle guy (nick?) wasn't good, i found it rather fake and just didn't like it at all. The right guy (they i'm a jew obsest dude wich i don't know the name of) was pretty good, but not that good. That's why the sound is worth a 6.
5. I know that this should be a funny cartoon, and don't get me wrong i've got a great sence of humor, but i just couldn't laugh. Sorry mate but i'm convinced that you've tried hard and got a lot of people laughing but it just didn't work on me.
I hope you don't hate me now, but if you do don't get me wrong. I live in a country that gives me the oppertunity to speak frealy about what i feel and i don't think this movie should have gotten front page.
But i know that if you work well on your scripts, voice-acting and animation, you should get in the top 50 easily if you would really like to.
Hello's from holland,
ElementsDesign
p.s. again i'm saying that my english isn't perfect yet. Still working on it though and i think it's coming on pretty wel (but that's just my opinion).
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that was kinda messed up..... but i liked the animation.....