Very good
Good work. Here are some suggestions for improvement:
The lines of text that appeared on the blank backgrounds could have used some color or shading. It seemed especially out of place when the dark night sky alternated with the blank white screen of text.
At the part that's narrated "I went to a far away land...", a few lines of text stick out of the side of the screen.
well
it was a good animation, it's a nice change to watch something besides a comidy...good work.
Wow, it was good.
First of all, the graphics were great. Ok, maybe little color on the Eevees. But, that was not really a huge loss. Each character seemed to have their own particular style. The style was determined: a love story that turned to sadness, then joy. That's rare. This, being similar to forest guardians, was one of the only good, or well really only serious flashes. Plus, even having a dark aura, I'm a sap for love stories. Sound was cool, as it matched, but it was a bit yuck at first. The flash didn't need violence, or humor, or even really interactivity. (although the play button was considered interactive, so we gave you a two. Overall, 8. It was really nice. Kudos from The Shadow Network.
not bad
Good job with the dramatic progression. There were, however, a few grammatical errors in the text. The music fit the story, and is effective at drawing the viewer. Most would have cried from the unexpectedly expected reunion at the end, it certainly follows form.
that brought up some bad memories