Reviews for Slap

[Major-punk]

Pretty good

That was great movement and such but you would of had a much better score if you just put faces or a little colour
Nonetheless a good flash And i hope it gets saved

BaconisGood4You responds:

Thanks alot major_punk. I agree, some more detail would have been nice, but I'm lazy :).

[MDayShakespeare]

It's supposed to be hackey-sack

I was enjoying it til they started using their hands, which you don't do in hackey-sack.

BaconisGood4You responds:

You need to be alittle more open minded MDayShakespear! Make some rules or variations, it's alot better (and a nice change). Thanks for the review.

[Mcdubs]

not too bad

Well, to critique a director is difficult for me as I have never done any directing; But here it is:
I wish you had used something a little more serious for subject matter other than a game of slap (we used to call it pelting). It is hard to judge the quality of a director without seeing his/her use of satire, symbolism, paraphrasing, and foreshadowing. I would've also liked to see how you would've taken on shadowing and color (not included) I liked the angles that the "camera" was placed at for the shots. I liked the way you showed how many people can be brought together through the actions of an individual. I also liked how you represented the competetive mood that can result from a simple, relaxing past-time.
or maybe I'm full of shit.
Not bad

BaconisGood4You responds:

Well I'm glad to see someone over analyized my animation :). When wrote direction and cinematography, I just ment if I created attractive and engaging camera work.

Your analysis, however, is very good, I'm glad you saw themes in it (I personally saw alot of individualism when I finished).

Thanks alot for your indepth review/analysis Mcdubs.

[The-s0rr0w-137]

No so bad but so good...

It's a bit strange.....

BaconisGood4You responds:

It is isn't it...




Thanks alot for the review The_s0rr0w_137.

[kevind23]

good for practicing animation

good flash i guess for practicing drawing and animation but otherwise a pointless flash. boring. not fun. pointless

BaconisGood4You responds:

Sorry that this was boring for you kevind23. Thanks for the review.