Excellent, Excellent stuff.
This looks just like one of the books I read . . . and I love those books. You have serious potential for making movies like this; it is exciting, and mysterious, and you actually get people to start caring about your characters - even in the first chapter! If you don't continure this to the end, it would be a shame and a waste of supreme talent.
Wow!
best series i ever seen! you must teach me these skills!
this is so great! this gets a five!
I have a reason to come to this site now
The greatest flash ever on this site. This was so incredibly entertaining, and so, so beautiful. It would be like watching TV if I had a big computer monitor. The script was insanely awesome, except that he called them "Syndicate Scum" twice. My only problem with the entire thing. 5/5, and good luck with this **hopefully** long series.
P.S. Fight scenes were the best on this site. Ever. Oh, and another thing, I believe the music was a tad too loud and overpowered the voices a little.
i woud have loved to rate it all 10's buuuut
on the graphics they were good except for one there were some occasions where angry and sad anime expressions could be used (teary eyed and a dark gaze maybe) then the girl running the animation on the running (saying its just reused) that it could be a bit better like the normal graphics now for the high points it all flowed well i loved that and the backgrounds were good. the sounds were ok but on the boat you could hear the wind more clearly than the people.and as for ineractivity and humor well you cant expect those to be 10 when there was nothing for us to do but watch and there werent really any jokes.
Can't wait to see more
This was great. The story seems interesting. The flash was beautiful. I can't wait to see more.