you have ruined my whole fauking day
look i dont know what your problem is. what the hell was that explosin for. jesus man. for the whole time i have been viewing this webstie this has beed the worst flash in the history of newgrounds.
you should be ashamed of yourself niga
-.- boring really and horrible
I hope you and your entire family die being raped by stinging nettles and you see your mother orgasm as she dies before you succumb to your needly-anal related death. And haaave a nice day :v
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i would like to know what is actually going on there in that what it to be called a flash film since none of it made any sence what so ever. how this is getting a score i dont know i rather see this gone and burned.
I rather see you gone and burned you jigger :v
weird
It scores points mainly for Randomness. We like Random. However, making whole movies of Randomness was pushing your luck!
Back in those days your work really was messy compared to what we do now, perhaps you feel a bit differently toward the early reviews?
- The pro-Clock message on the preloader and the end were crawling and you know it.
-nobody cares how long you had Flash.
-Tidy up the spelling on the Authors notes that ramble and don't make much sense.
-get your submissions checked for details before submitting them. they are very complex, so you need it.
Remember that the longer a Flash takes to download the more people expect from it.
This Flash would mainly appeal to Mario/Wario people, for the rest of us it rather lacks story, however there is a lot in it.
Good job but...
I see now you know how to work with flash but this flash like "shocked" me becouse I couldn´t find any plot, any sense in it. These are just a tips and I´m not mocking you.
- make your flashes more clearer. It was boring to watch a flash where everything is moving with some sad sprite graphics and I didn´t even know what happened.
- Your flash made a little sense but use some text boxes to clear what they are doing or saying. Watch Randy´s ROTMK series and you will understand what I mean. Or some voice acting wouldn´t be any bad ;D
- Then you should make like "Wario goes somewhere and says something and then example Mario says something and they would fight. Not like you did: "Mario is jumping like a moron upside down and then Wario comes somewhere and then he background changes and you don´t even know what is happening. That is wrong in your flashes. I don´t mean that your flashes suck or something (I liked em all) but I just gave you some tips!
really good luck with your future creations and sorry my english isn´t very good and if you´r still reading this, you rock :D
Thanks neobyte1, it's all true, the graphics on this are well crap, I will not deny that, and as for storyline, it is non-existent. I just made it up as I went along, in my newest creation, Paper Mario, there is a story kinda happening near the end and there is even voice acting, whoo, thanks again for the review at least you were blunt about it!
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what do you mean "sa-"?
im confused
im Dave
what are you on about?
what the hells sa- mean?
and where is the room?