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Reviews for "Forsaken - Episode 1"

eh so so

The graphics are great anf the style is well done.

But you use the same stupid vampire fighting cleche' thats been done a 1000 fucking times.

even the title of your flash is an unoriginal load of $#*&!!

You could turn out to be one of the best flash artist on newgrounds but only if you stop wasting your time on overused crap like this

hmm

You make a wise choice to stop making stick movies

Well...

It has good animation, and I'm sure many can't argue with that. Interesting effects, and I was actually mostly impressed by the music selection. Where did you find that score, pretell?

The only bad thing (and its a big one) is the writing. I'm not sure how many cheesy and cliche lines I found in the script.
"You can't kill us..."
"You have no power..."
"Then, you shall die, brother"
"Believe me when I tell you, I am not your enemy."

Cheese galore. The story is pretty unoriginal as well. It reminds me of Resident Evil and Dawn of the Dead way too much. Everyone turns into zombies (or in this case, vampires) when they are bitten, and the special forces are coming in to stop them, but aren't doing too well. There is the one hero that kicks a reasonable amount of ass, and he is their only hope. Sound familiar? Yeah. You get the idea.

D3vilsheep responds:

I'll fire my writer. Thanks.

kinda good..

the plot of the story is good something new i havent seen before and the animation was smooth too but the voice overs were a bit dramatic like they put effort into it but to much.

you can definatly do better

sticks are overused and are getting boring. your movie deffinatly showed that you have talent but you and alot of other flash artists are beating a dead dog. Also your vampire part didn't seem to well thought out, nor did it even in the slightest stay cohereant with the oringinal legends. Though dwelling on your pluses, it did have well written diologe, scpre and voice actors. More elaboration in the beggining episode would be nice. the first episode tends to be the most indepth episode thourghout a series