needs work
it was a nice idea but the animations need some serious work. the music was really nicely chosen though.
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Reviews for "Training Pays Off!"
so someone throws a ball at him.....
and he kills them?
well improve the art and stuff....
Nice try, but I don't think it'll make it...
You've got the drawing style and you know how to draw and stuff, I like the graphics, but it should have been less sketch-like, these graphics look a litle half-finished, if you know what I mean...
You could also make some more animation, for example in the part when he walks seen from the side. That's just a single graphic moved up and down a little. You could at least make the legs move...
As for the plot... Well, sit down and think a while and I'm sure you can come up with something much better =)
Overall a nice try, but I think the graphics and maybe the plot will get it blammed. Improve your graphics and I'm sure you can make good stuff.
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okay ill be CONSTRUCTIVE in this reveiw, when porportion is as off as it was on the faces it's distracting i'd suggest you google polykarbon tutorials. violent revenge fantasy is a very very underwhelming subject for plot put some soul into your work. finally, this is an animation it should MOVE
Nope go back and try again.
I'm very dissapointed to see this passing. It looks like you put an honest effort into it but what these people fail to see is that it had little animation. It was basicly a bunch of messy drawings put together and slightly animated. If it were up to me I'd blam this, only becuase it could really be alot better if you just went back and tried harder.