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Reviews for "Mezzo-Pazzo: short #2"

Not the best, but definately not Suikoden III.

You gave this entry a 5, raising its score from 2.5640 to 2.7215!
If this movie is protected you will get a PROTECTION point!

Just to spite the guy before me.
Also, you climbed up there pretty quick, eh?
Anyway, not bad. ^_^

VigorousJammer responds:

indeed, I did climb up pretty quick, thx for the 5 ^_^

twas ok

You gave this entry a 5, raising its score from 2.5556 to 2.6121!
If this movie is protected you will get a PROTECTION point! I guess "thelace" voted too early. BTW I gave it a 5 cause i always want to be guaranteed a protection point

VigorousJammer responds:

hey there, thx for the 5 ^_^

LOL!!!

I am so Gangsta.
:>

VigorousJammer responds:

indeed. :-P

haha

"We could go back to my place and um, do stuff thats uh, totally not gay..." LOL thats hilarious.

VigorousJammer responds:

heh, thx :D

Too short

First I had to turn it up to hear the gay guy voice. The dialogue was ok, it needed somethign more, sure he meets him, but needed eitehr some humor or some insult to go along with it.
It needed to be a bit longer, show some background story what the guy with Oreko was there for.
The gay guy legs looked freekishly long, everyone arms looked a bit long also. Couild use a little more work.

VigorousJammer responds:

Really, I have had problems with arms in the past, and I still do sometimes nowadays, and this was just one of thoose times... proportions aren't really my high spot, but I'll definitely try to keep improving upon it...
as for the dialouge , it was just a quick improv between me and my friend... it wasn't meant to actually have any depth... it was just supposed to be random...
as for the background story, I think you're right, I really should have developed the characters in the first place... but I still am planning to do that in another episode... some sort of... big... prequl...