This needs improvement!
The art was well done, animation ran smoothly, and the sound was good except for that thing at the end where I had trouble following along...As for humour, this flash was lame. You call this funny? If you do, then you have no idea how to make people laugh!
P.S. If you're going to reply to this, make it a good reply because so far your replies have been either asking for a higher rate, or saying really retarded statements!
P.P.S (15 year later) The reply still makes me laugh. Better than the animation I guess.