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Reviews for "Paradox (Bestial Remains)"

Sounds raw and unpolished

The intro is pretty nice. I like the riff that is played there. When the vocals set in I am tempted to turn off the song instantly. But I fought that urge back and I was rewarded with an unpolished but yet pretty cool song.
Because if I leave the overdriven guitars and drums aside then the song IS in fact a good one. Fast, uncompromising and brutal "in your face" metal. That's what I like (well, at least most of the time ^^)

I'll sure check out the remastered version of this.

{ Review Request Club }

Blackdoom13 responds:

Ok thanks for the review. I'll try to make it better.

Listened to the remastered

And while it was better, this one isn't bad. I really enjoyed the intro, and when the vocals began they surprisingly kept me interested in the rest of the song.

It's what a metal song should be and I believe you nailed for the most part. The ending didn't quite fit, but the main focus was on the metal itself. Overall it wasn't bad.

-Review Request Club-

Blackdoom13 responds:

Ok thanks for the review. I'm thinking about changing the ending sometime.

Hmm, like I mentioned in another of your songs.

I'm a big heavy metal fan so you're getting a few extra bonus points from me, but overall it's just not good heavy metal music. The biggest problem all around is the voice. It just doesn't sound great. A lot of it sounds very rushed and just isn't the heavy metal voice that I think of when I listen to a song like this.

The guitar and drums were done very well. Perhaps the entire thing had a quality problem all around.

The lyrics themselves were ok here, but sounded like they needed some actual singing in between the screams. Your best quality though is obviously the longer screams like at the very end of the song. The other parts just don't seem to cut it for me though.

~ Review Request Club ~

Blackdoom13 responds:

Ok thanks for the review. But listen to our remastered version of this song.
I think you'll be pleased.

Bad vocals

It started off quite nicely, but when the vocals came in it went downhill. They seemed to be closer to talking than singing, and that wasn't because of the screamy quality. Either way, it just didn't sound good.

I think you could have made the guitar a bit louder, because there was a nice melody there, but it was overpowered by the drums and the vocals.

The endign was quite boring..Try to find more original endings than fading out. It just didn't work in a heavy metal song.

[Review Request Club]

Blackdoom13 responds:

Ok thanks for the review.
But try listening to our remastered version you might like it more.

the deep 14 year olds...

RRRrrOOOOoaaaaRRrr I live with my mom and dad Paradox!!
RaaaaaaaWWwwwaaaaRrrr YES! I would like to join you in your Paradox!
RRrrrOOooaaaarrr Can sleep on the coutch?!

Blackdoom13 responds:

Oh my arent you cool? lol