Cool flash
I liked basically all of it, but I have few things I didnt.
#1 The text bubbles and the voices are always expected to be a lil off, but your were WAY off. During the ....uhh starwars thing .? the vices ran over the text so fast, it still had 2 text screens to go when it was done. That was pretty annoying cause in like 4-5 scenes you ended up waiting for the text screens to finish before it would move on.
#2 some of the music was a lil too cheesy, like the fight thing, that was , well gay. Put basically any rpg fight scene music over that and it woulda been alot better.
All in all, it was good flash, nice work.