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This had great components to it. I really liked whatever sound effect you used for the melody. The song didn't vary enough though. I guess I was wanted more transitions. More things like around 01:09. The drums didn't sound believable, though they did at least make their point. The melody repeated too much. You changed the instrument that MADE the melody, but it still was the same thing. This is pretty good. You did more then a decent job. Not bad at all.
Thank you for your criticism, I'll keep in mind all what you said, will help me a lot! :-D
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Intro 0:00 - 0:27 needs some different shit in there, make it catchy so I want to hear the rest
The beat after this part is weak imo, I need something more dramatic
1:09 lead is pretty cool, maybe with said dramatic beat would sound more badass
1:36 is my fav, but more drama in the song would pop this into 'hit-song' type
it is a good base for an awesome song, but as-is is a stock trance song. Get creative to introduce the different parts. Make it church-song easy to follow but two drunk grrls drama sounding lol. Good Luck.
Thank you for you review! I'm fairly new in creating music, so I'm very thankful for you feedback!