Very Good!
That was good, but, you should think about adding more gradient filling to the stuff, it looked kinda boring with single colored elements.
The music was OK, but you should maybe sacrifice some space to make it sound better, it was a little bit too compressed. Otherwise, the emotional state in the music was good, and it really fit into the movie.
This wil probably make some good scores! at least I hope so.
I think that you really have some potential, use it!
Good luck with your future submissions! (Lycka till med dina framtida filmer.) :D
//Governor