This isn't too bad.
I'll pass this flash. It's not too bad, but you REALLY gotta work on sound. Don't use a cheap mic and get a program like Adobe Audition 1.5 or another program that can give you noise reduction and dynamics processing. The drawings weren't too bad and it made me laugh a tiny bit. Good luck.
wow
pretty good for your first flash! can't wait for u to make 2.
eehm rule 1
NEVER submit your first flash, even if this is good for one. But remember, NEVER. Repeat me; n-e-v-e-r. Why? They are allways just tests with the program, or internal jokes, and that is not what ng wants to see.
Bad!
It's not the VERY worst animation I've seen, but it surely isn't anything impressive. I don't see very many "mumbling speech" these days, and theirs a reason for that, it's horrible when people do that. And the plot, I think it's been used over, and over, again, and when that plot is used, the flash gets blammed insanely. And MJ productions? That is disturbing!