ok
you need to use a higher framerate. that animation was way too choppy. decent graphics tho.
Reviews for "Peter's day"
for first flash it was very very good
but...there was no plot. some guy gets shot.. thats it
good music
good drawing...just cant give it a good vote for no plot
Copy of that Redneck cartoon?
reminds of of that cartoon, something to do with rednecks, i cant remember the name of it...
Thats where u got the idea right? Cause its near enough identicle.
But remember, in that cartoon, that was the intro, you need more.
haha better than my first
its much better than alot of firsts ive seen, but you should have sticked with that whole one scene idea. also you should of had him take a sip of coffee right be fore he was shot. btw the blood on that sucked, but that was the worst part
Nearly there
For a first submission this isn't bad. The graphics are reasonable, but you need to put some more effort into them. The music was cool, but needs to be COMPRESSED! Also you could have done with a preloader. There is a basic one that NG supplies and they also have instructions on how to compress your audio.
Keep practicing and take stock of the pointers I have given you, and you should do well here.