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It's annoying when people overuse "LOL" and it's annoying when you make fun of it just as much. As for animation... anyone with basic flash skills could do that. The story didn't hold too well either. It's the same humor and story that I've seen in way too many flash cartoons. The music wasn't all that funny and the AIDs song was out of place. Then again, I'm sure it's what got you a decent score. Good luck with future projects and maybe try some frame by frame animation or something in your next submission.