The story made me hurt...
I liked the style of the animation but the story was very bad. It's superficial at best and far from being insightful or deep. It touches on many platitudes and rather recycles than to be original. This makes it very spiritless. Instead of just trying to be deep you should come up with your thoughts and figure out a way to express them with your own imagery instead of relying on worn commonplaces. You nice style combined with a better story could be very good.