pretty good
it was pretty good its a shame there werent any other animations but oh well and narutos was pretty funny only i wish you would have given sasuke a better finishing move
pretty good
it was pretty good its a shame there werent any other animations but oh well and narutos was pretty funny only i wish you would have given sasuke a better finishing move
I dunno......
I dunno.The fight wasn't really intersting but naruto's finsher was funny.But in the anime sasuke would of been able to escape,so it's dissapointing that the fight wan't longer.But still overall good for your first
Not bad
It wasn't that bad, I like most of it but the both endings was sh!t. I like the fact u try to try to add humor to it But I don't think that would happen in the anime.
I dont wanna sound harsh
But it seemed more like they were taking turns doing attacks than like an actual battle going on. You should of made it where they were both constantly doing something. I didnt like it when Sasuke teleported then Naruto stood there for like 5 seconds.
You should of made it where they were both constantly doing something. - WTF,I thought they were fighting. XD
Good for a first time
Considering that this is your first flash I'll be easy on you.
First I didn't like that you used music from Chrono Trigger. If you're doing a Naruto flash then you should use Naruto music.
As some others have been saying, the fighting gets monotonous as they keep donig much of the same actions over and over. Maybe it would have been better if you made the fight somewhat more epic. Have them move around, changing the scene and have them use their much more renowned jutsus like Rasengan and Chidori.
And the endings were just bizarre in my opinion. You have Naruto use kuchiyose no jutsu to do kage bunshin? And on top of that, AKs? And do you mean to tell me that Sasuke threw that shuriken clear around the world? I understand that you were trying to go for some comedy, but if you're going to do that for an anime then base the humor in the anime.
As I said earlier it's quite good for a first submission. Work on this flash a little more and you could have something really awesome.
4/5
Thanks for the review!I might work on some of the stuff you pointed out.