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Reviews for "Talon VS Salocin - Part 1"

Too short

I don't think it's bad, far from it, I think its one of the best flashes I've ever seen. You have a intensely excellent talent for animation and exude advanced drawing skills. The sound was a good enough quality but the voice acting was below-par.

Things seemed to happen a little fast, which is okay, but they happened quickly and then nothing was resolved. You shouldn't have submitted such an incomplete storyline. If you build up to a fight scene, go ahead and have the damn fight scene. I'm sick of people thinking they need a cliffhanger ending. You should have gone further as this flash by itself is rendered useless without the help of the parts that come after it. As it stands alone, it is not worth the small amount of time despite its tight animation. Sorry, but you get a 5/10 and a 2/5.

There's more to flash than good animation.

nice design

great drawing and pretty smooth flash...but there is no originiality in the story. same old ideas...ninjas, anime, clans, etc. good work on the graphics once again.

bravo very good

i scored low becuase i dont like that sort of thing the style was good

Eh.

Hasn't this been done before? I mean, c'mon. Try to at least attempt to make a slightly original plot. And the "Dragon" and "Wolf" clan? Could you possibly come up with something original? No offense, but I think the Warring ninja Clan thing has been done a hundred times over. The one thing I did like was your character designs. They were very detailed and original. And the dude with the red hair does NOT look like Spike. Just because his hair is slightly the same shape doesn't mean he's copying Spike.

Oh Come on

Im sorry but u need to do ALOT more with that, story starting was good, Cutting it off in the middle of what u may think it about to be the best part SUCKS, NEVER do that its Bad,
sorry for the bad Rateing but im jst being honest, it sucked lol doesnt deserve 1st place