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Reviews for "Talon VS Salocin - Part 1"

How can you tease us like this!!??

The animation style reminded me a lot of Samurai Champloo and Cowboy Bebop, and the character syles were very nice. I just wish it was longer... Still though, if you're going to continue this, I've not a doubt that it will be one of the best animated things on Newgrounds. Story and voice acting, a bit subpar though. But don't let that discourage you. Great, awsome, fantastic job.

^_^

nice...but...

the sound was too quiet and the whole flash was too dark yet it remained pretty cool.. good work

It was pretty good.

It was a pretty good cartoon as far as serious animations go. The rain was extremely well-made, and so were a good handful of your character shots. My only peeve with it, and this is only my opinion, is that it's slightly cliched.

Also, in my opinion, you'd get a lot bette scores if you hadn't ended it so soon. By ending it only where the action starts and not giving the watcher more of a taste first, they don't look forward to the next one as much as they could, or should.

This cartoon was pretty nice, and I like your drawing style. Can't wait for more.

You're either a Wolf's Rain or a Cowboy Bebop fan.

I recognize the style...its a real nice touch.

You need to work on your directing a little though and your sound.
Take more time in writing your script and really...I mean really think about your characters dialogue and timing.

Besides that it was good but I couldn't tell which character was which ..who is Salocin and who is Talon?

Good animation by the way.

Hm...

Well, the plot is a little lost here. It confuses a little, because as far as the legacy is concerned, it's still a little shady. The monk didn't really seem to have all that much to contribute to the storyline, but as far as coolness goes, I'd give you an 8 out of 10. Rather broken plot, but otherwise, quite fine. You might want to speed up the backgrounds when the Wolf Assassin was running thorugh- he didn't appear to be moving very quickly.

~VelvetDarkRocks~