Clever story, great execution!
I like the boozy twist on the classic tale, with the rhyme scheme preserving the sense of "fairy tale" wonder. The ending was a gross, yet amusing shock!
Clever story, great execution!
I like the boozy twist on the classic tale, with the rhyme scheme preserving the sense of "fairy tale" wonder. The ending was a gross, yet amusing shock!
um ok
not a ten
because of the end
Said P-hed with a fronw
not a grin
soo funny
why dont you add the bingerbreadman saying to the old lady or the old ladys husband go you over grown shit and make like a bitch so i can shit on you
fucking genius
I love how you put fairy tale rhyming with bullshit all mixed into one AWESOME!!!!!!
haha
Funny story with a good moral at the end.