Not too bad, but not great either.
It's pretty well drawn, but kinda boring to watch. A story line with some dialog would make this much better.
Not too bad, but not great either.
It's pretty well drawn, but kinda boring to watch. A story line with some dialog would make this much better.
You need better story line
Please, try to make better, I hate looking at dog shit...
A bit lame...
No-one can fault you for the obvious care, attention and effort you spend on your work but man... you need to get a grip when it comes to a storyline. I mean... cyber-punk spiky-haired street samurai collects illegal weapon to kill adversary. How original. And ooo... he gives him the finger after he dies and then the building explodes. I mean Jesus Christ.... it makes Die Hard look like the Brother Kramazov. You're a talented Flash artist, don't be so corny. Use your talent properly goddamit!
I must say i like your style.
You do some pretty good work, and i must say i like the style you have in it. Not to criticize, but you might want to soften the edges of your drawings so that they blend in a little better but other than that. You have some top rate material. I look foward to seeing more of your work
nice
this is very good for a first attempt at flash. keep it up.