Better!
This one was much better, not only was it's appearance better looking, with the subtitles and the widescreen touch. But also the storyline felt like it might actually be beginning to go somewhere. Unfortunately it didn't go as far as I hoped it would, but it was still an improvement. I only really have two complaints about this, the main one being the lack of events, perhaps you could have came up with a bunch of twists and turns for the movie to take and you could show more things taking place within the movie. Other than that, my only complaint is with the music, as it didn't seem to fit with the action at any point.
Also I noticed there was a glitch within this movie, when the zombie got shot, during the sequence where 'Toxicity' was playing, after he disintegrated and the guns shot again, he reappeared, perhaps you should look into fixing that.
Lots Of Love, Rebecca Rose