YEp Yep
You got some made stuff....
but
through out your work, i always hear the same little imperfection...
I'm talking about your bass, drums , beats , etc... you need to find a way to bring it more out. Make it sound like an explosion, I don't know if you understand what i'm talking about, :)
Because you got some mad melody here, combine it with some really Phat Danse drums, beats, snears and bass and you get yourself an Epic stuff !
Try working on that, and keep the good stuff coming,
lat'!