good one
a bit random, but it was an interesting animation.
Reviews for "Treefingers"
not excellent but not horrible
The story wasn't really clear (atlease some subtitles), and the graphics were ok. But I kinda get the story, so I give u half of a whole mark. Good luck on ur future entries!!!
Wow! More art. And it's passed. Is this NG?
Graphics: Not the best art or animation, but the artist tried really hard to paint a realistic world based on her garden. I thnk copying the same flower was the word design decision you could have made, and not animating the people seperately was the second worst. Well, it's no bitey of brackenwood, but it did have heart, not to mention a hell of a lot more soul than stick figures. The little girl seemed like the best looking gnome or fairy or whatever they were. In fact, now that I think about it, if each and every one of those little guys had a different head and face on them, I might have scored the art a lot higher. Interesting...
Style: Gotta give you credit for trying, and style is where you're getting it. The author sucessfully depicts a sprawling world. The riverbank is a place and the garden is a place, and you get a real feel for how they are connected to each other. There's a difference between drawing some backgrounds and depicting a world, and I think this author depicted a world.
Sound: low-key mood music that delivers on the emotion, but it's a little subdued. The music could have had more of an impact. The emotions it conveys to me right now are kind of ambiguously happy and sad. It could have been pensive, or mournful, or sad with a twinge of hope, but it wasn't any of that. Of COURSE voices aren't neccessary! Give us some credit!
Violence: Man, and I thought my arms were potent.
Interactivity: movie
Humor: none
Overall: TEH END! I mean, tenned! 10'd. But that doesn't mean there isn't a ton of room for improvement in various categories. Besides working on your general drawing abilities and trying harder on detail and animation, you should try to make/download music that tugs at the soul a little harder. I liked your storytelling style and the fact that you left so much open to interpretation. I saw the damn screen turn red, and I'm STILL not sure if he's necessarily evil or not. In short, make more art. This art ruled! :D
Interesting...
An innovatively told, and well-captured frenkenstein story. The animation isn't the best I've seen, but it flows very well, and you should be credited for that. The choice to keep the actors silent is perhaps my favorite aspect of the flash. The only elements you are left to derive emotion from are the color and music of the piece. Interpretation is what truly composes art. Well done.
Very Nice
Very nice, some good animation and a nice 'storyline', rather touching. I liked the way some things were animated, eg. the water. Poor little guy :(