baaad...
You've watched too much Dragonball Z...
And what's with the exploding parts on the guys leg?...
Reviews for "Phoenix Feather Chapter 1"
Blueshark0407 responds:
I was more inspired by other anime than Dragonball Z.
Snow suck
The snow effect is really bad, some other animation too.
Continue on this way, improve some graphic and give more animations to your characters.
Blueshark0407 responds:
It was meant to be rain (sorry)
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Graphics : It looked all nice but these thick white lines at the beginning were bad, and next time, improve the running a bit :)
Sound : Not so good, next time, try to get softer footstep sounds, when walking on sand
Interactivity : Play button :D
Style: Nice full body, bit sloppy but still nice
Violence: it had enough of violence but could've been more
Humor: That was funny to me when the guy whit blue haired found that machine thingy and started laughing :P
Overall: Nice, next time improve graphics, add some tekst/voicec and bit of more fighting and blood :P
Thanks for reading my review
Blueshark0407 responds:
I was also annoyed about not having any better sound but that wasn't up to me.
wow
i like it keep up the good work. i voted 5. i'm very positive this will be protected. just keep it coming. maybe include a short prequel to the first for a lil back story. i do like where this is going. keep this series going dude. i think this could make front page. pretty tight flash.
Blueshark0407 responds:
Thank you very much, It will continue
A good effort but still rough
I appreciate the amount of effort that went into this flash, that is why I gave it such a score, Unfortunaly the animation was rather staggered and the story hard to follow, these two apsects really dectracted from the flash. I would like to see your work as you improve as it could get quite interesting.
Final note but I felt like the music was a tad repedative, dont know if its just me though.