Good Flash
It's very good for a first submission. I hope this one survives judgement, it's worth watching. Some advice though, make a loading screen and a play button, preferably not the newgrounds one but a custom one. Anyway, good job.
Reviews for "Parachute Guy"
Good for a stick flash.
Pretty good for a first flash. Stick animations don't usually get good scores from me, but you had something going on. Lots of good, fun, free-flowing energy.
The part that had me was the stunts on the scrap metal, I couldn't help but laugh. Then the sledding down through the pine trees was pretty cool.
Nice job. ;)
Good Job...
It was ok i liked the story. And you did a good job animating.
But....you need the following...
1. Pre-loader
2. Better art.
Black-Fox5 responds:
Thank You, I'll look forward to it (If only I know how to do it... Damn!)
MAN!
I thought this was gunna suck because of the graphics, but this rocked! Do you have a link to the band that made the soundtrck? Awesome dude, I got nothing else to say.
Black-Fox5 responds:
Thanks...! I used Morpheus to download that music. The name is "Metal Gear Solid 2 - Substance : Skateboarding Theme". Thanks for watching...
3/5 Not bad
I liked the following about your submission
1. it didn't suck like most first submissions do.
2. The transitions between scenes were smooth, and the plot was well thought out.
3. The graphics were ok
4. I held my attention all the way through
I did not like the following
1. The stick figures were crappy. Characters should be either stick, or "human" You made the line type so bold that you could've easily made them into human characters and probably raised your score by one.
2. What was the deal with the sound?
3. You are quite good at flash, but this should've been a four if your drawing skills were better developed. I think your flash would be much better if you took a couple of art classes at school, like drawing.
anyway, good work.