biggest problem with this...
some of your jokes...couldn't hear because the voices were muffled. And the ones that we could hear weren't necessarily funny so why bother adding a laugh? and the laugh itself drowns the coversation...so i missed half the jokes....
so just FIX THE LAUGHING, SOUND quality, and timing of each!!!
Damn LaughTracks
The story was alright... The claymation wasn't too bad. Nice scenery.
But dude...the Sound got 0 because of those DAMN LAUGHTRACKS! So god damn annoying! PLEASE do not add them into the next episodes. They were loud, hurt my ears, and laughed at stupid jokes which made the jokes even more stupid!
The humour points would have been much higher if the Laugh Tracks werent in there - they ruined the whole experience for me.
Sorry.
Good Luck with future episodes!
Well ..
I'm not really into claymations, I can see you put some serious time into making this. Ahhm, watchable except please lose the canned laughter. Lor' we have to deal with this on real TV today, and NO I don't watch TV =EVER= for this main reason. :D
You frame-rate could be twinged.
I saw that you were repeating images in a set several times such as for the roomie's conversations; that's good compression, and may be a basis for you to make a whole series of animation clips and finally just put them together without having to add too many more claymation scenes in the future until later eps.
Good luck !
David