Firgured I'd try to leave a helpful review:
- Maybe start it without that hat loop in the background? (right at the very start)
- Then maybe take out the hat loop altogether? It sounds too simple and generic.
- The breakbeat is......awful :P It sounds really flat and sorta lame (Just being honest, not trying to be a dick). You should definitely work on it a lot, and make it more exciting (ROB MAYTH THAT FUCKER!)
- Transition at 0:28 is amazing, great work
- I don't like how at 0:32/0:33ish the bass cuts out. It sounds weird IMO. Maybe try something else there?
- Buildup is the best part of the song, that "screaming" synth that holds the longer notes is EPIC.
- Kick could be a little more punchy (like, more high frequencies), and EQ'd a bit better, it sounds kinda sloppy.
- I'd like to hear a nice ride cymbal on the kick ;)
- 0:59ish is waaaaaaaaaaayyyy too quiet, although you probably know this. Something's gotta be done with that.
- 1:04/1:05 is so cool :P
Anyways, hope I helped. Good stuff here, keep it up ;)