it needs a little bit more
but hey i don't quite have the equipment to even come close or even a smidgen to create something like this. .... but it still needs a larger fight seen...and yes an origin of why this is happening, oh could you add a little more of the story line, and some speaking parts. I know the story, it's just some people might not, if you know what i mean... think of your audiences as a little kid....imagine they have never seen stuff like this before, so you have to layer it and layer it until it becomes crystal clear to those little kids. I know it's also a work in progress, but when it comes out refined, I'll still enjoy this one...just because I love to see your art!