Simply poorly done
Sorry, mate. I can tell some real effort went into this. Don't give up, but... well, I'd suggest perhaps finding an animator with whom to collaborate. With better visuals your score could have improved substantially. As it is, it just wasn't that good. Sorreh to have to break it to you.
eh...
it was ok, nothing special, and mabey get someone older to do the talking next time
Eh
Not to be mean, but this wasn't very good. It almost seemed like it was stolen, but I dunno. Anyway, the drawings, animations, and sound were all very crappy, and so was the story and humor. Please try harder next time, I see talent in you if you just practice and get really good. Nice try
If it wasnt very good...how could it be stolen?
it was pointless
it was ok. Next time get a person who has gone through pueberty. I could tell a child was doing all the talking.
this is crappy
the animation was crappy too
Can you not read? Constructive critisism.