Good job, You proved your point well
I liked the drawing style and the animation was pretty nifty and it was pretty funny too. You showed that if you put try to stay away from formulaic-plots/plot devices, put a little effort and originality into your project and otherwise apply yourself, you can come out with a promising project.
P.S: I was going to write a review for this on thursday, to coencide with your upcoming birthday, but I lost access to a computer and only regained it saturday. So cosider this a belated birthday present :)