hmmmmm
intrasting. ok overall it was okay i mean for a first. the only thing you need to do is do a personal fight with good music. For examble:
1. Sonic vs Shadow
Also it would be better if you added the fight scenes longer. i know its your first but but you can try harder on ur second submission.
Hope you write back :)
crap I have no idea what happened :( obviously the sound wasnt optimized good enough that's why it speeds up and that's what basically put this in the trash can. oh well, there's still more up ahead :P
A poor piece of work.
Ok, the sprites were horribly resized and look like crap, the sound was okay, the joke was lame, and no one cares about stuff that doesn't have anything to do with the joke.
Try again, newbie.
hmmm....
it wasnt so bad for a first. the main problem is that there is waaaaaaay to long of a lead for a small joke.
:~> Bad, Bad, Bad
Not so bad for a first, but still not a good one. You could have got yourself a better start, and I'll tell you why:
* Graphics: they should not be only a rip-off. Using sprites is different than reproducing the "entire" game. That ending was just like Sonic's. I know your idea was to spoof it, but it would be excpected that you put some original scenes between the game's, instead of using the exact same images the game showed.
* Sound: a collection of musics that can't be put together the way they were. Music should create the environment for your animation, and you had a bad timing on that. For instance, the "Supersonic" music starts playing a lot before Sonic becomes golden and shiny. I know this is your first attempt, but you should test it and check wheter the music is alright or not before submitting.
* Humor: the movie was too long for a 1-second joke. And it wasn't that funny.
Overall, that's a 4. You might think I'm being too harsh, but I disagree. At least, I told why I disliked your movie and what you could do to improve it. Believe me, I don't have the intention to disgrace your work, but I'm that critical when I got to be.
Best of luck for you on your next submissions.
# Poirot #
a tip
it was pretty good, but maybe add a little to the battle scenes, instead of one little thing and the dude dying.