not too shabby
nice drawings, although i picked up on the repeating background during that scene when hes running. not much else i can say cept good job.
-Slick
F-KREW Mischief Maker
Reviews for "The first tear"
good try
good try, the movie was touching, the song fitted with the situation( exept at the end when the he see the scene)
the only thing that annoyed me a little was that you insisted too much on " i am alone" there is nobody... it was getting tiring... except for that, it was a nice atempt for a flash...
good work.
review
Preliminary Thoughts: A story in color, somthing that told a really good story.
Graphics 6 - I didn't like that fact that you would grayscale than have a dude with blue eyes and stuff. The Grandma was poorly drawn. Inserted text was massed up and font didn't rwally mathc.
Style 8 - It was a great story. But it was a bit to predictable.
Sound 10 - I liked the song that you had for this video it was that bad. The music fit the video which is great.
Viloence 6 - This should be not scored, I really didn't want to see Grandmas blood.
Interactivity - NOT SCORED
Humor - NOT SCORED
Overall 7 - Only thing to compliment is the music.
Subsequent Thoughts: It was nice heart touching story that could have done better.
Legendarysim -
Grading Scale 1.4
well
His grandma looked kinda like a monster :/
((( DECENT )))
This was decent, i like the black and white theme, but i would suggest addong some "VOICES" and such for a better overall effect and more music it was good but needs more to it, i did like the artwork though...
~X~