i agree w the guy below me
i suddenly like the original a lot more. 1 for effort
Reviews for "Lilium-Dance of Lies pt.1"
wow
I think the only thing you accomplished is to make the original look better by comparison. Frankly, i was disgusted by this, not because of content, but because of quality. If you had the flash ability of Jhon Greneby, the action in this would have been awesome.
hey
yo dude that was sick (if I rate low I like it)
sorry
I have to agree with everyone else
this is a copy
also, your style and skill is not up to the original story
i believe you could be really good if you did your own,
and don't be discouraged. practice makes perfect
Excellent..
This was very, very well done. I must check out second part soon.