It's out there...
This is a nice one. In the opening sequence, the sign doesn't pan in time with the corridor, and that detracts from the scene.
I do like the protagonist's expressions, throughout, and the symbolic throwing away of the rag was well done and well timed to the piece. The violence herein was symbolic also, and well executed using the silhouettes you chose. An excellent choice, all things considered.
Somehow, I expected a sadder ending, with the damaged ship exploding just as they embraced, willing to die for their one moment of freedom rather to live a life in slavery...
I liked this one, and indeed, with a little brushing up and some tighter attention to the minor details, yeah, this is a winner.
As for getting this broadcast, this reminds me of something you'd see on the original Heavy Metal anime. Therefore, good job.